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What is My most important possession? I have a my most important possession. It is my library. Right now, are you thinking about my library, bookcase with many shelves for keeping my favorite many books in small room? If you think like it, sorry, your thought is wrong. It is the simple reader, kindle, well-known in many people all over the world. Yet it is a simple reader, how it has become precious, worth for me. An year ago, I really wanted to read a book, Great expectation written by Charles Dickens. Soon, my birthday happened and I got a present reader, kindle with my wanted to read book and others. One time, I have forgotten it in library of school. After a week, A girl brought it to me. Also, my reader gave my love to me. So it is my most important possession. Please correct my an entry.

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What is My most important possession?

I have an important possession, it is my library. Right now, are you thinking about my library, bookcase with many shelves for keeping my favorite books in a small room? If you thought then like it, sorry, your thought is wrong. It is a simple place, kindle, well-known for many people all over the world. Yet it is a simple reader, how it has become precious, worth for me.Year ago, I really wanted to read a book, Great expectation written by Charles Dickens. AS Soon AS my birthday came, I got a present reader, kindle with my wanted to read book and others. One time, I have forgotten it in library of school. After a week, A girl brought it to me. Also, my reader gave my love to me. So it is my most important possession. Please correct my entry. 

 

i can understan what you are trying to say , but good work i liked the story

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