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London Olympic(Correct please!) News said that Olimpic will be held in just a half year. My acquaintance will be practcing much harder so that he will be in peak condition for it. He has won a gold medal in the World Championship in Athletics in Korea last year. I heard from him directly that he had visited the disaster area of the north eastern Japan and played with a lot of elemetary school students before paticipated in it. He was moved to their smile and swored that he would win a gold medal so that he could give all of children much courage and hope. Actually I watched a program in TV that many childen whom he had met was cheering him over TV later. They all were very happy to see he won the gold medal. He is very faithful and gentle. 彼はほんとうにまじめでおだやかな人です。 I had a phote taken with him holding a gold medal after he had won it in Athene Olympic. But I don't remember the place where I put the precious photo.

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London Olympic(S)(Correct please!)

The news said that Olympics will be held in just a year and a half.
My acquaintance will be practicing much harder so that he will be in peak condition for it.
He has won a gold medal in the World Championship in Athletics in Korea last year.
I heard from him directly that he had visited the disaster area of north eastern Japan and played with a lot of elemetary school students before paticipated in it.
He was moved by their smiles and swore that he would win a gold medal so that he could give all of children much courage and hope.
Actually I watched a program in TV that many childen whom he had met was cheering him over TV later.

"I watched a program in TV n which many of the chidlren that he had met were cheering for him."


They all were very happy to see that he  had won the gold medal.
He is very faithful and gentle.
彼はほんとうにまじめでおだやかな人です。

I had a phote taken with him holding a gold medal after he had won it in Athene Olympic. But I don't remember the place where I put the precious photo.

 

 

 

 

:D Good luck! The passage was fairly correct...good job :D

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