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The first note after a long time
Since I`ve been here last time, a lot of different stuff happened in my life. I joined my went to university in Tomsk where I study studied English and French,. I met my love,. was I was in Israel as a volunteer and going. I plan to work in the USA during this summer. Also, now I`m a member of Tomsk Rotaract club, so if anybody from Rotary\Rotaract want to study with me, or just looking for a contact, I`m ready to work together with you))
Nevertheless, I`m looking for a good friends, will I will be happy to talk with smbdy anyone from Canada, USA and other french and english speaking countries speakers. Moreover, I can help with russian, if u guys need =)
My correction is probably not the best. You have so many broken sentences. Here's my advice; try not to write many complicated sentences (the ones that have multiple subjects, verbs, and objects) if you can avoid it.
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