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Please help me! Tet holiday was out of from today. I will start with new targets and my efforts. I set them the end of last year. This year, I will try to spend time for physical exercise. I get older. My health become worsen. Having the good health, I can work hard, earn more maney, enjoy more. Today my internet was suddenly trouble. I called to the internet center. Luckily, they helped me quickly. If none, I wouldn't have had the internet connection to chat and write in my diary. According to buddhism, from after the 4th day of the New Year, my ancestors aren't in my home. As a result, we no longer offer many bunches of incense on my altar.

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Please help me!

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Tet holiday was out of from today.  <Today is the last day of Tet.>

 

I will start with new targets and my efforts. <As of today, I will start working on my new goals.>

 

I set them the end of last year. [you don't need this line since you are talking about your NEW goals]

 

This year, I will try to spend time for physical exercise. <...spend more time doing physical exercise>

 

I get older. My health become worsen. <As I get older, my health becomes worse (worsens).>

 

Having the good health, I can work hard, earn more maney, enjoy more. <Having/Enjoying good health, I can,,,and enjoy life more>

 
Today my internet was suddenly trouble. <... my Internet broke down>

 

I called to the internet center. Luckily, they helped me quickly. <I called the Internet Center and luckily, they helped me quickly.>

 

If none, I wouldn't have had the internet connection to chat and write in my diary. <Otherwise, I wouldn't have had the internet connection to chat ....>


According to buddhism, from after the 4th day of the New Year, my ancestors aren't in my home. <According to Buddhism, after the 4th day of the New Year, the ancestors aren't at home any longer.>

As a result, we no longer offer many bunches of incense on my altar. <As a result, we no longer burn insence in our family altars>


[Your three lines about your Internet connection breaking down are a little off since you are talking about TET... you may conclude your entry with them, but they are still a bit out of place!]

Good luck with your writing!


 

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