introduce myself

Hello! Everybody.My name is Clorrisa I'm a 17-year-old girl who come from China. I found it is happy for me to make friends. I like to learn English by listenning music and seeing film.Frist,it can pratise listening. Second,I am able to enjoy my free time after studying.
If you want to make friend with me ,please call me

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Hello everybody!! my name is Clorrisa from China. I'm 17 years old, I love make new friends and people I like so much learn English especially when I'm listening music and seeing movies, because that's a great way to practice my listening skills.

If you want add me as a friend you can call me.

Have a good one guys

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José

introduce myself

Hello! Eeverybody! My name is Clorrisa. I'm a 17-year-old girl who come from China. I found it is happy for me would like to make friends. I like to learn English by listenning to music and seeing watching films. First, it I can pratise listening. Second, I am able to enjoy my free time after studying.
If you want to make friends with me, please call me.

Note:

Clorrisa, please be careful with spaces around fullstops and commas.

It should be like this:

First, I can...

not like this:

First ,I can...