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A new start
Now it’s the beginning of 2012 in China’s lunar calendar and as expected, we had a wonderful time. Nowadays, with the rapid development of society, people are too busy with their work.
Therefore, the spring festival is alwaysthe only time for family reunion. Last year, my grandpa suddenly passed away, just at that moment, I realized the true meaning of family. We youngsters are always living for tomorrow, we seldom looking back while we pursue our lives. But the cruel thing is, we usually lose something when we gain something. This evident paradox makes me confused. Since it is a new start, I want to tell myself to keep on moving forward and cherish every second of family time. I Hope all of us can rewrite the new chapter of life.
A new start
Now it’s the beginning of 2012 in China’s lunar calendar and as us expected, we had a wonderful time. Nowadays, with the rapid development of society, means that people are too busy with their work.
Therefore, the spring festival is always means the only time for family reunion. Last year, my grandpa suddenly passed away, just on at that moment, I realized the essential 1. meaning of family. We youngsters are using today for always living for tomorrow, we seldom looking back during the pursuing journey whilst we pursue our lives. But the cruelty cruel thing is, we usually lose something when we gain something. This evident paradox makes me confused. Since it is a new start, I want to tell myself to keeping moving 2. forward. What’s more, and cherish every second of family time. I Hope all of us can rewrite the new chapter of life.
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1. Better vocabulary would be "true", ie the true meaning of life is to love your friends and family
2. Never use the gerund with two consecutive verbs ie. I keep having/keep on having the same problem NOT I keeping having
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