A very special mashine (please correct my sentences, thanks!)
I would like to have a very special mashine. It would be a very clever one. It should know you / me, your / my qualities and your / my abilities very much. It would be like a headset. If you’d get it on, it’d say, what is the best profession for you. The best, the one, the only you can do and want to do in your whole life without any boredom. You could come to know what are you talented in, without any stress. Do you have such a clever mashine?
People call people with abilities written down abow couch, personal coach. But a couch will never say to you, this and that is your right profession. Or you can try parapsychology. In your subconscious you may know the 3 professions they are defineted for you. Have you ever tried it?
If you ever have had the feeling, you can’t find your right profession than you really need such a clever mashine. If you find out where to buy it, please contact me with the details immediately. Thank you in advance!
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I would like to hope that... :-D
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Come on, do you really think that such sentient artifact can be lent and borrowed just like that? :D
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Thank you for your corrections!!!
@ Zerge: The Sorting Hat of Hogwarts is a very good idea! :-) Could I lend it for a couple of hours? :-)
@ Fareed: there is an other correction. As Zerge wrote, native spearks seem to be busy to correct my entry :-(
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A very special machine (please correct my sentences, thanks!)
I would like to have a very special machine. It would be a very clever one. It should know you / me, your / my qualities and your / my abilities very much. It would be like a headset. If you’d put [past] it on, it’d tell you, what is the best profession for you. The best, the one, the only you can do and want to do in your whole life without any boredom. You could learn what you are talented in, without any stress. Do you have such a clever mashine?
People with above mentioned abilities are called coaches, personal coach. But a couch will never say to you, this and that is your right profession. Or you can try parapsychology. In your subconscious you may know the 3 professions they are defineted for you. Have you ever tried it?
If you ever have had the feeling that you can’t find your right profession then you really need such a clever mashine. If you find out where to buy it, please contact me with the details immediately. Thank you in advance!
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Lazy dog! I think what you want is the Sorting Hat of Hogwarts, not a special machine =) I for one prefer astrology. =)
Fareed, I'm not good in English either, but as native speakers all seem to be busy getting their own entries corrected... ;)
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