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my personal statement Being very interested in media industry and keen on audio and radio production, I am writing this essay in support of my application for acceptance into your program of communication studies. After one year’s study, if given the opportunity, I plan to work as a designer or technician in one of leading communication companies in China. I am currently a senior student pursuing a bachelor’s degree of English in Tianjin University of Commence. Having studied diligently, I had an overall GPA of 3.32 and ranked 2nd in my class of 29. I received TUC Academic Scholarships for three consecutive years. In addition, I was honored as “Excellent Student” by the university in 2011. Besides, I was the only one in my department who got full mark in Calculus and one of two students in my class who received certificate of National Computer Rank (Grade2, C language), which turned out to be a great help in learning other computer software like Cool Edit(used for editing sound) and Vages (used for editing radios). Unlike most students who focus on studies during the first two years on campus, I spent large amount of time working as a tutor, teaching English, Physics and Mathematics to several children separately. This not only provided me most of money to support myself, which few of my fellow classmates can do, but also gave me the opportunity to learn people’s thoughts and solve their problems accordingly. For instance, I promised to tell a mysterious story if accomplished lecture in time to a 14-year-old boy who not concentrates on class while bought chocolate as prize to a 13-year-old girl who is sensitive and lacks sense of identity.

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My Personal Statement

Being very interested in media industry and keen on audio and radio production, I am writing this essay in support of my application for acceptance into your program of for communication studies. After one year’s study, if given the opportunity, I plan to work as a designer or technician in one of the leading communication companies in China.

I am currently a senior student pursuing a bachelor’s degree of in English in at Tianjin University of Commence (TUC). Having studied diligently, I had an overall GPA of 3.32 and ranked 2nd in my class of 29. I received TUC Academic Scholarships for three consecutive years. In addition, I was honored as “Excellent Student” by the university in 2011. Besides, I was the only one in my department who got achieved full marks in calculus and one of two students in my class who received the Certificate of National Computer Rank (Grade2, C language), which turned out to be a great help in learning other computer software, like Cool Edit (used for editing sound) and Vages (used for editing radios radio).

Unlike most students, who focus only on studies during the first two years on campus, I spent a large amount of time working as a tutor, teaching tutoring several children separately in English, physics and mathematics to several children separately. This not only provided me most of money to support myself, which few of my fellow classmates can do, but also gave me the opportunity to learn people’s thoughts and solve their problems accordingly. For instance, I promised to tell a mysterious story if accomplished lecture in time to a 14-year-old boy who did not concentrates on concentrate in class if he accomplished a lecture in time, while bought bringing chocolate as a prize to a 13-year-old girl who is was sensitive and lacks lacked a sense of identity.

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