Paul's Headache Paul feels terrible. his head aches. he might have the flu. he doesn't want to eat dinner go out. jack advices that he should see a doctor. he have a good doctor and he can make a

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Paul's Headache Paul feels terrible. his head aches. he might have the flu. he doesn't want to eat dinner go out. jack advices that he should see a doctor. he have a good doctor and he can make an appointment for he. But paul doesn't want to see doctor. jack hope he can go to bed early and get some rest.but paul will have a history test tomrrow.he failed the last test.so he must pass this one. so he can't go to early.he must study.

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Paul has a headache

Paul feels terrible. His head aches. He might have a flu. He doesn't want to eat dinner or go out. Jack advises Paul that he should see a doctor. Jack says he knows a good doctor and he can make an appointment for Paul (too many he, don't know who is who). However, Paul doesn't want to see a doctor. Jack hopes Paul can go to bed early and gets some rests. However, Paul will have a history test tomorrow. He failed the last test, so he must pass this one. He must study and can't go to bed early.

A few pointers:

1. The first must be capitalized after the punctuation mark fullstop.
2. Try not to start a sentence with but.
3. As you are telling people something which has happened, it is better to use past tense.

Good luck in your studies!!

I agree with Brandon Zin's correction except for that he changed "get some rest" to "gets some rests". You had it correct with "get some rest".

Re:1 above: The firs letter must be capitalized.

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