A Great Writer: J.K Rowling

Dear grils and boys:
Today ,l will give a story about a great writer:J.K Rowling to everyone.It can teach us a lot! l need your attention.Thank you
There is saying, "Where there's a will,there's a way". Rowling is a person with strong will.
Rowling was honored with the name “Mother of Harry Potter" because of her big success in writing Harry Potter.
Before she wrote these books,she was just a poor teacher .Many years ago, she saw a little,black-haired wizard with a lightning scar in his forehead on her way home,Then after which she thought up a story about a wizard. After she got home,She decided to write the whole story in her mind.
But However, she was so poor that she could’t use electricity appliances to get warm, so she had to write her story in a shop next to her home.After she finished her first book, she met another problem - no one would like to publish her book. But However, she didn ’ t give up.She tried and tried. At last she solved it.
She got rich and successful as soon as her first book was published, then she used ten years to write another 6 books about Harry Potter.And The story was made into movies,too.
After she succeeded, she didn ’ t forget the trouble she experienced. She gave one million pounds to some poor people.
How kind, great and excellent she is !
From this story ,we can see that if we hope to secceed ,we must have a strong heart, then, work hard. And We should also have a kind heart to love everyone around us! That's all.Thank you,everyone!

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