First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi,
my name is Aaron Yung. i am from china. It is a beautiful country.
i am twenty-three.

I like English, it is a beautiful language, and it has more purpose, it is world language. i want to see the world, I want to study English.

It is great that you want to study English, it is such a well-known language, but quite difficult to learn.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi,
My name is Aaron Yung. I am from the beautiful country of China. 
I am twenty-three years old. 

I like English because it is a beautiful language and it have has more many purposes. It is a language used around the world language i and I want to see world. This is why I want to study English.

Overall, not bad effort, you definitely have talent in you. Just remember capitalization of names, places and at the beginning of sentences. As well, don't forget to capitalize "I" even when it is used in the middle of a sentence. The second sentence 'I am from the beautiful country of China" was changed because instead of having two short and choppy sentences, I changed it so that it would be one sentence that flows. Great job, keep up the great work!