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I am learning English. Can you correct it, please? Thanks. I got dressed hastily and came to the restaurant by 5 p.m. I always worry before long trip about it. I try packing all suitcase for many days before trip's start. We will show you more experiments in next time on our exhibition. If he will goes up on the hill, he will can see all our city. Girl took grandmother's photo-albom. she saw saw photoes, took one of them and put in pocket. He is older his bother, but he so carefree as his brother. I went in the hall as quietly as I could. I tried find this photo in cupboard, but I couldn't do it. I heard someone's speech. I was scared in first few second, but I finally knew my friend by his voice.

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I like 'quickly' better than 'hastily' for every day use. Hastily works ok written but can sound stilted in conversation. I would use "I dressed quickly/hastily and arrived at the restaurant by 5." in writing. "I GOT dressed quickly" will raise no eyebrows in conversation, unless everyone in the room is more concerned about exhibiting their superior grammar than actually talking to people. In conversation "I got dressed quickly and got to the restaurant by 5" or "...and was at the restaurant by 5" also sound natural. As with anything, consider your target audience. Teachers or pedantic individuals may not be impressed that your command of English lets you speak like a normal person. "I GOT dressed hastily" sounds unusual. 'Hastily' is less common than 'quickly', which means used in conversation by people with a larger-than-average vocabulary - people unlikely to be throwing unnecessary "gots" around.
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I am learning English. Can you correct it, please? Thanks.

I dressed hastily and came to the restaurant by 5 p.m.
I always worry before long trip. I will try packing all the suitcases for many days before the trip starts.
We will show you more experiments next time in our exhibition.
If he goes up the hill, he can see our whole city.
Girl took grandmother's photo-album. She saw the photos, took one of them and put that in her pocket.
He is elder than his brother, but he is so carefree as his brother.
I went into the hall as quietly as I could. I tried to find this photo in the cupboard, but I couldn't do it.
I heard someone's speech. I was scared in first few second, but I finally knew my friend by his voice.

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