Breakfast at Tiffany's

Hello! I am Vanessa and I am learning English and Cantonese. I have been learning English for a while, and {also studying?} Cantonese, I am just a beginner and I have no idea what I write about in my first italki-writing. I will write something about the novel I just read last weekend, Breakfast at Tiffany's. I think that I am lucky because I haven't watched the movie before reading the novel. Due to this, I can build images of the novel's characters in my imagination rather than just remembering the images of the actresses and actors. I love the story in the book and I have really been moved by the part where the woman threw her cat but regretted it immediately. That reminds me of my dog. 

I am not good at writing, especially on the details. I hope you can help me and correct my writing. :)

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There you go, hope that helps!