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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Well, hello there. I'm Amy Louise and I'm 16. I study Art and Design at college, i like anime,manga and drawing. Why I'm learning Chinese; I want to be a teacher. I love the country, possibly more than my own.. I like the language and the way it sounds. I have strong passions for my future and Hong Kong. I love the people and culture. I enjoy learning. I enjoy talking to people around the world. I like listening to stories. I miss Hong Kong so much, i could cry myself to sleep. I love the food and want to taste more.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Well, hello there. I'm Amy Louise and I'm 16. I study Art and Design at college, i like anime,manga and drawing. 
Hi,大家好。我的名字叫Amy Louise,今年16岁。我在大学里学习艺术设计,我喜欢动物、动漫和画画。
 
Why I'm learning Chinese;
我为什么要学习中文? 
I want to be a teacher.
我想成为一名教师。
I love the country, possibly more than my own..
我热爱这个国家甚至于我自己的国家
I like the language and the way it sounds.
我喜欢汉语和它的发音方式
I have strong passions for my future and Hong Kong.
我对我的未来 和香港充满期待
I love the people and culture.
我喜欢那的人和他们的文化
I enjoy learning.
我喜欢学习
I enjoy talking to people around the world.
我喜欢与世界各地的朋友说话
I like listening to stories.
我喜欢听故事
I miss Hong Kong so much, i could cry myself to sleep.
我非常想念香港, 甚至会哭着睡着
I love the food and want to taste more.
我喜欢食物和品尝它们的味道

I try to translate your sentence into Chinese, i am not sure it's correct. If you try to write in Chinese, there will be nice for your learning and we can kindly help you correct it. Anyway, have a nice day.

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Since this is an English poem or prose, I think I'd better make no comments here, ha, I'll just say I like the way you write and I am kind of moved by your love for Chinese and Hongkong. I love English and the way it sounds as well. So I guess we may become good friends and share a lot on language and culture. Just to pursue your dream and you'll succeed.

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