My sentence( I need some advices)
1.gain: I gained some gifts because today is my bithday.
2.gather: I gathered a lot of Adidas clothes.
3.generation: I don't want to have a generation gap with my friends.
4.generous: I am not a generous person.In contrast, I am a singey person.
5.goal: My goal is to be a confident girl.
6.golden:I want to have golden hair like foreigners
7.govern:Taiwan was governed by Japan.
8.grade: I am second grade in high school in Taiwan.
9.greedy: Be a greedy person is not good.
10.greet: I always greet my teachers.
11. grown-up: I want to be a grown up because I can make all decisions.
12.guard: My dad is a police so he guards this area in 24 hours.
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Oh! I forgot.. also, the first one "I gained some gifts because today is my birthday."
I think the word "gained" here does work but it is strange... Not very common. It is more natural to say "I received some gifts."
A good example of "gained" is "I gained some weight this month."
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8.grade: I am in second grade in high school in Taiwan.
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I am in my second year at high school in Taiwan.
9.greedy: Being a greedy person is not good.
11. grown-up: I want to be a grown up because then I can make all decisions.
12.guard: My dad is a police officer so he guards this area for 24 hours.
(The word "police" is plural. If you are discussing one person, he is a "police officer" or "officer of the law")
All the others were very good. :) Good job Libby!
Just remember to put periods at the end of all sentences, and to put spaces after every comma.
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for the time being well`~
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My sentence( I need some advices)
1.gain: I gained some gifts because today is my bithday.I can't explain why, because I don't know the reason, but gain sounds unnatural in this sentence
2.gather: I gathered a lot of Adidas clothes.
3.generation: I don't want to have a generation gap with my friends.
4.generous: I am not a generous person.In contrast, I am a singey person.
5.goal: My goal is to be a confident girl.
6.golden:I want to have golden hair like foreigners
7.govern:Taiwan was governed by Japan.
8.grade: I am in second grade in high school in Taiwan.
9.greedy: Being a greedy person is not good.
10.greet: I always greet my teachers.
11. grown-up: I want to be a grown up because I
12.guard: My dad is a police ofificer so he will guard this area in 24 hours.
(you said in 24 hours so that means it is in the future, therefore guards -> will guard)
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