1. Bifrost, a Bridge Between the Heaven and Earth

2. Ancient Norse mythology often referred to a bridge called Bifrost. Bifrost was described as a bright quivering arch crossing the sky. The bridge was created for gods to descend from the heaven to earth. 3. Neisklyucheno The prototype for Bifrost might be the aurora.

In some eposes the rays of the aurora are seen as 4. Valkyrie lights*.A Valkyrie in Norse mythology was a female who flew reyut on a winged horse to battlefields and choose the most valiant fallen in battles warriors to bring them to heavenly palace of Valhalla. 5. The warriors in the shiny armours were believed to appear in the sky to make Bifrost aureole. In addition I would like to mention that there is a mentioning of the River Rouge in Finnish mythology. The River was depicted as being on fire thus making a boundary between the realms of the living and the dead.

Dear Nastya,

I have made some corrections to your text. Before I explain my amendments, I should tell you that you have made a great effort in translating some mythological facts. Well done!

1. Not many people are acquainted with Norse Mythology as you are. The title must involve the reader to have a look! Do you know why lots of people find history boring? The answer is clear as a day, not many historians can capture readers' attention by story-telling, they just tell mere facts.

2. Every single English sentence must have a subject and a predicate! Just a hint for you, start structuring your sentences with them and you can't go wrong!

3. You can't use Russian words written in English manner! It took me a while to understand you, never mix the writing if it is not justified!

4. Too complex structures, you have to stick to the simple sentences, don't make them too heave to read.

5. The last sentences have lost the whole meaning and connection to the bridge! You never make the reader lost, you can intrigue, you can interest, you can involve but never leave your reader unattended. Remember all sentences should be logically connected, this way the idea will be clear and easily understood.

Good luck!