My friend.
My friend is a good person. He is the man reliable and honest. He is tall and slim. He has got dark hair. He has well a character. He is patient, reliable and friendly. He always helps me do my work. He is very clever because he likes to read books. He also enjoy walking wish my dog Alice. My friend is my husband. We are the best friends in the world!
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Privyet Svetlana, it's better to vary the start of your sentences and use conjunctions to make your writing flow more easily.
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My friend.
My friend is a good person, a reliable and honest man. He is tall and slim with dark hair. This person is a patient, reliable and friendly character who always helps me do my work. He is very clever because he likes to read books and also enjoys walking with my dog Alice. My friend is my husband and we are the best friends in the world!
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I know what you are saying Svetlana.This is beautiful :))) God bless you.
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My friend.
My friend is a good person. He is reliable and honest. He is tall and slim. He has dark hair. He has character. He is patient, reliable and friendly. He always helps me do my work. He is very clever because he likes to read books. He also enjoys walking my dog Alice. My friend is my husband. We are the best friends in the world!
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