First notebook entry: Introducing myself

大家好！ 我叫Josh. 我是大二学生，在南密西西比大学上学。 我的专业是化学。 我最喜欢的颜色是蓝色。 我家有五口人：我爸爸，妈妈，哥哥，妹妹，和我。　我学了一年半的中文。　我学汉语的原因就是我很喜欢这个语言，觉得好听，有意思。而且，我喜欢中国文化和人民。　如果你想要更多消息的话，就应该给我发邮件吧。　对不起，我的中文不太好。

Hello, everyone! My name is Josh. I am a sophomore studying at the University of Southern Mississippi. I am majoring in Chemistry. My favorite color is blue. There are five people in my family: my dad, my mom, my older brother, younger sister, and me. I have been studying Chinese for a year and a half now. My reason for studying Chinese is that I like the language, I think it sounds beautiful and is interesting. Moreover, I like the Chinese culture and people. If you want more information about me, you should send me an e-mail. Sorry, my Chinese isn't too great.

你的中文不错，但是有些细节的地方还有待修改。学中文是一个很漫长的过程，要学好很难，但是祝你好运！：）

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

大家好！ 我叫Josh. 我是二年级大学生，就读于南密西西比大学。 我的专业是化学。 我最喜欢的颜色是蓝色。 我的家有五口人：我爸爸，妈妈，哥哥，妹妹，和我。　我学了一年半的中文了。　我学汉语的理由就是我很喜欢这门语言，觉得好听，有意思。而且，我喜欢中国文化和人民。　如果你想要更多的了解我，就应该给我发邮件吧。　对不起，我的中文不太好了。

Hello, everyone! My name is Josh. I am a sophomore studying at the University of Southern Mississippi. I am majoring in Chemistry. My favorite color is blue. There are five people in my family: my dad, my mom, my older brother, younger sister, and me. I have been studying Chinese for a year and a half now. My reason for studying Chinese is that I like the language, I think it sounds beautiful and is interesting. Moreover, I like the Chinese culture and people. If you want more information about me, you should send me an e-mail. Sorry, my Chinese isn't too great.

嘿嘿 你的中文比我的英语好多了 加油 Fighting~

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

大家好！ 我叫Josh. 我是二年级大学生，学在南密西西比大学二年级大学生。 我的专业是化学。 我最喜欢的颜色是蓝色。 我的家有五口人：我爸爸，妈妈，哥哥，妹妹，和我。　我学了一年半的中文了。　我学汉语的理由就是我很喜欢这个语言，觉得好听，有意思。而且，我喜欢中国文化和人民。　如果你想要更多消息的话，就应该给我发邮件吧。　对不起，我的中文不太好了。

Hello, everyone! My name is Josh. I am a sophomore studying at the University of Southern Mississippi. I am majoring in Chemistry. My favorite color is blue. There are five people in my family: my dad, my mom, my older brother, younger sister, and me. I have been studying Chinese for a year and a half now. My reason for studying Chinese is that I like the language, I think it sounds beautiful and is interesting. Moreover, I like the Chinese culture and people. If you want more information about me, you should send me an e-mail. Sorry, my Chinese isn't too great.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

大家好！ 我叫Josh. 我是大二学生，在南密西西比大学读书。 我的专业是化学。 我最喜欢的颜色是蓝色。 我家有五口人：爸爸，妈妈，哥哥，妹妹，和我。　我学了一年半的中文了。　我学汉语的理由就是我很喜欢这个语言，觉得好听，有意思。而且，我喜欢中国的文化和人。　如果你想要了解更多信息的话，就给我发邮件吧。　抱歉，我的中文不太好。

Hello, everyone! My name is Josh. I am a sophomore studying at the University of Southern Mississippi. I am majoring in Chemistry. My favorite color is blue. There are five people in my family: my dad, my mom, my older brother, younger sister, and me. I have been studying Chinese for a year and a half now. My reason for studying Chinese is that I like the language, I think it sounds beautiful and is interesting. Moreover, I like the Chinese culture and people. If you want more information about me, you should send me an e-mail. Sorry, my Chinese isn't too great.

hey,Josh.in general u did good job but u have some probs on distinguish formal Chinese and informal counterpart.Plus Chinese is a language we speak as briefly as we can when delivering message.But I think I will see your progess little by little;)  u can skype me or qq me if u want.I'm into cultural exchange and language study i major in English in southwest university in China and i taught American exchange students on behalf of  foreign affairs offcie on my campus.looking forward to talking to u on skype ,qq or  fb soon;)