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Health

It is important to think about how to improve the condition in many hospitals in developing countries. There are many problems with the basic as well as with the machines and techniques in those countries. For instance, in Vietnam, majority of local hospitals need to be rehabilitated and supplemented with new machines and techniques. As Because of local hospitals are of/having low standards, is low base so people used to go to the larger hospitals in the cities or capital. That is why, in larger hospitals is are always overloaded. You can see two patients lie lying on the same bed and their keepers have to sleep outside on in the passageway. In addition, the cure all is paid treatment costs are high these days and many people can't cannot afford to pay for their treatment. So, for many poor people, when they are having have some diseases like cancer or heart problem, there are no options left rather than simply going to home and waiting for death. they simply go home and ... wait to die. It is really painful to see the situation like that.

One should think over it and the government has to do something to raise the standard of primary conditional base for public health care as well as save poor destinies from the death.

Please correct this note for me if there is something wrong :) Thanks so much! :)

Health

It's important to think about how to improve the condition in many hospitals in developing countries. There are many problems with the basic, as well as the machines and techniques in those countries. For instance, in Vietnam, majority of local hospitals need to be rehabilitated and supplemented with new machines and techniques. Because local hospitals is low based, people used to go to the larger hospitals in the cities or the capital. That's why larger hospitals are always overloaded. You can see two patients lie in the same bed and their keepers have to sleep outside in the passageway. In addition, the cure-all is paid and many people can't afford to pay for their treatment for many poor people. When they have some diseases like cancer or heart problems, they simply go home and ... wait to die. It's really painful to see the situation like that.
One should think: the government has to do something to raise the conditional base for public health, as well as save poor destinies from death.