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An Agnostict Talking to God You know, God, I am an agnostic.No offence. Agnostics do not know if God exist or not. So, I am not supposed not to talk to You. When I do not know if there is someone next to me, in the darkness, I ask "is there someone here"? If I have an answer, I will talk, if I have not any answer, I am supposed not to talk, is not it? Many people around say that you are here, other deny. So, I am in doubt. I will give you the benefit of the doubt, I will talk to you (or You?) Who are Y/you? Could you introduce yourself to me. The definitions that the religions give of You are not clear enough. Sometimes your followers conflicts between themselves. I have heard one Muslin (not all of them, of coarse) mocking one Christian about his definition of You as "three in one". I have heard one Christian saying that Jesus is you. A Jew told me that Jesus is not You, but the Jews are waiting for you. Another one, a Buddhist, told me that the idea of God is not important, the most important is living in harmony with and within ourselves and reach happiness and Nirvana. Aside of that, there are many, many other definitions and explanation about you, the heavenand the hell.Well you are supposed to know all that stuff and I am not going to tell everything I have heard. I have been listening also some atheists. I think they have a point too. Can you clarify me, please? Well, that is only my first question. A pleasure to talk to you. See you! Thanks for your corrections and comments :)))

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An Agnostict Talking to God

You know, God, I am an agnostic - no offence. Agnostics do not know whether God exists or not. So, I am not actually supposed not to talk to You. Whenever I do not know if there is someone next to me, in the darkness, I ask "is there someone there?" If I have an answer, I will talk; if I have not any answer, I am supposed to not talk, isn't that right?

Many people around me say that you are here, while other deny it. So, I am in doubt. Yet I will give you the benefit of the doubt: I will talk to you (or You?)

Who are Y/you? Could you introduce yourself to me? The definitions that the religions give of You are not clear enough. Sometimes your followers argue between themselves. I have heard a Muslim (not all of them, of course) mocking one Christian about his definition of You as "three-in-one". I have heard a Christian saying that Jesus is you. A Jew told me that Jesus is not You, but the Jews are waiting for you. Another one, a Buddhist, told me that the idea of God is not important, but the most important is to live in harmony with and within ourselves and reach happiness and Nirvana. As well as that, there are many, many other definitions and explanations about you, the heaven and the hell. Well, you are supposed to know all that stuff and I am not going to tell everything I have heard. I have also been listening to some atheists. I think they have a point too. Can you clarify it all for me, please?
Well, that is only my first question. A pleasure to talking to you.
See you!

Thanks for your corrections and comments :)))

Great! Just a little bit of polishing here and there. I made some of the punctuation corrections boldface, so you can see them a little more clearly.

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An Agnostict Agnostic Talking to God

You know, God, I am an agnostic. No offence. Agnostics do not know if God exists or not. So, I am not supposed not to talk to You. When I do not know if there is someone next to me in the darkness, I ask, "is there someone anyone here?" If I have an answer, I will talk, if I do not have not any answer, I am not supposed not to talk, isn't it? is not it?
Many people around say that You are here, others deny Your existence. So, I am in doubt. I will give you the benefit of the doubt and I will talk to you (or You ?)
Who are You? Could You introduce Yourself to me. The definitions that the religions give of You are not clear enough. Sometimes, your followers have conflicts between themselves. I have heard one Muslin (not all of them, of course coarse) mocking one Christian about his definition of You as "three in one". I have heard one Christian saying that Jesus is you. A Jew told me that Jesus is not You, but the Jews are waiting for you. Another one, a Buddhist, told me that the idea of God is not important, the most important thing is living in harmony with and within ourselves and reach happiness and Nirvana. Aside of Besides that, there are many , many other definitions and explanations about You, the heaven and the hell. Well, You are supposed to know all that stuff, but and I am not going to tell You everything I have heard. I have been listening also to some atheists. I think, they have a point too. Can You clarify me, please?

Well, that is only my first question. A pleasure to talk to You.

See You!

Thanks for your corrections and comments :)))

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João, so let's have a joy ride on the boat.. :D
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Maharany - Now I agree100%, or better, 150%. *A hug. :)
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No worries João :-) I saw it as something quiet funny after a long emotional explanation, then..it has no relation, and I was like: huh?! Whaaaaaaaahahhahaaa.... I was probably too much for the intro, being too emotional about this writer. Anyway.. Despite I am not an agnostic (I'm a believer), you and me and more people out there who know how to use their brains and respect whatever others believe, can be at the same boat and value everything passes by a long the journey. I think you and me, we've witnessed too much to understand, that at this moment we can't be too strict to one believe...*hug

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