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Heavy Snow in New Year
Last night, Dalian city snowed heavily. All the world was white. I like snow very much, because i'm from the South of China where the snow is very little. I remember when i was Child it snowed heavily, but now because of global warming almost there is no Snow.
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Heavy Snow in New Year
Last night, Dalian city snowed heavily it snowed heavily in Dalian city. all the world is white The whole city turned white. I like snow very much, because I'm from south of China where it snows very less. in my memory I remember when I was a child, south snowed heavily, it used to snow alot in the South but now, because of global warning, It almost never snows.
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