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Yup!! It's summer holiday! Summer holiday last two month is coming. What a long time! I won't go home this summer hoping to gain some experiences in community.But time fly,half a month past .I do nothing... There maybe some reasons on me .First, I aways hesitate to do things so that i can't find a job suits me.Second, I often avoid to do something when it comes.The last,I usally wait,never do things initiative.Yes!!initiative and passively are different.What you have determined you are success or failure. I'm stay at my dormitory see some films and a history TV series called THREE KINDOMS.I think I gain a lot from it.But i still want to find something to do not only study in a room.I want to make some money and prove to everybody that i'm indepandence!

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Yup!! It's summer holiday!

The last two months of the summer holiday last two month is are coming.  What a long time!
I won't go home this summer because I am hoping to gain some experiences in the community.  But time flies, half a month past.  I have done nothing...
There maybe some reasons for why I have done nothing on me.  First, I aways hesitate to do things so that I can't find a job that suits me.  Second, I often avoid to doing something when it comes.  The Lastly, I usually wait, and never do things with initiative.  Yes!!  Initiative and passivity are different.  What you have determines whether you are a success or failure.
I'm staying at my dormitory to watch see some films and a history TV series called THREE KINGDOMS.  I think I gain (OR: learn) a lot from it.  But I still want to find something to do, not only (OR: just) study in a my room.  I want to make some money and prove to everybody that I'm indepandence independent! 

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I have the same problem, I don't have a lot of initiative.  >.<  It's something I'm trying to work on.

Anyway, let me know what questions you have about this correction.^^

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