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Happy new year! Taday is the first day of 2012,happy new year to everyone!Many people say that 2012 is the end of the world, I still don't want to die, this world is so beautiful.Anyway, I will have my new year's presentation,I wish my families are all health and happy,and to myself,I will take an examination of BEC Higher at May, I hope it will have a good result.At last,it's time for my Deutsch greeting to everyone,"Prosit Neujahr!"

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Happy new year!

Today is the first day of 2012,_happy new year to everyone!!_Many people say that 2012 is the end of the world. I still don't want to die this early, because this world is so beautiful._Anyway, I will have give my new year's presentation wishes._Firstly, I wish my family members are all to be healthly and happy._Second, and to myself,_I will take an examination of BEC Higher at in May, I hope to get it will have a good result in the BEC Higher examination which will be held in May._At last As for the last one,_it's time for my I would like to greet everyone in Deutsch greeting to everyone,"Prosit Neujahr!" 

建議: 1. 逗點和句點後要空一格

         2. 用半型符號 i.g. [!!!!!!!] &[!!!!]

         3. 勿中英直譯 i.g.  I still don't want to die 代表你仍然不想死。

         4. 注意 in May 跟 at May 兩個差很多。前者表示在五月,後者是在一叫做May的地方


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