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Happy new year!
Today is the first day of 2012,_happy new year to everyone!!_Many people say that 2012 is the end of the world. I still don't want to die this early, because this world is so beautiful._Anyway, I will have give my new year's presentation wishes._Firstly, I wish my family members are all to be healthly and happy._Second, and to myself,_I will take an examination of BEC Higher at in May, I hope to get it will have a good result in the BEC Higher examination which will be held in May._At last As for the last one,_it's time for my I would like to greet everyone in Deutsch greeting to everyone,"Prosit Neujahr!"
建議: 1. 逗點和句點後要空一格
2. 用半型符號 i.g. [!!!!!!!] &[!!!!]
3. 勿中英直譯 i.g. I still don't want to die 代表你仍然不想死。
4. 注意 in May 跟 at May 兩個差很多。前者表示在五月,後者是在一叫做May的地方
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