The Rain Holding me and him
cause i don't like to write formal note, so I will try to write a story by my self.
weather is raining, students are running to their own destination. I still in front of class, waiting his presence. after 10 minutes standing beside class, I see his beautiful face. breeze on my face when he passed in front of me. The rain increasingly heavy, no one else...just me and him still standing there. it is the third year I spend my time to fascinate him. sometimes, it's hurt to know that it's my secret to love him. And today, I say thanks to the Rain which holding me and him here. ^_^
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The Rain holding me and him Because I don't like to write formal notes, I will try to write a story about myself.
It is now raining. Students are running to their own destination. I'm still in front of the classroom, waiting for his presence. After 10 minutes, I'm still standing in the classroom. I see his beautiful face. I felt a breeze on my face, as he passed in front of me. The rain is increasingly heavy. There's no one else, just him and I still standing there. It is the third year that I spend my time being fascinated by him. Sometimes, it hurts to know that it's my secret to love him. And today, I say thanks to the rain which is holding him and I here. ^_^
To be continued...
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