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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Good morning/day/evening/year/life..) My name is Nina. I'm a 22 years old student and I come from Tyumen, small city on the south of Siberia. Now I'm doing masters degree in International Business. So I hope this site would be useful for improving my English and learning all these languages I want to speak) And also I really enjoy teaching and helping people with languages, so if you need help in learning Russian - feel free to ask me) ...we weren't born for one corner; the whole world is our native land)

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My Suggestion

Hello,

I am Nina, a 22 years old student, from Tyumen city in south of Siberia. I am currently pursuing a masters degree in international business, and the knowledge of (or understanding) multiple languages is an asset in this field. This is why I joined this site. Hopefully, it will help me improve my spoken/written English, and other languages that I am learning.

I really enjoy teaching and helping people with languages. So if you need help with the Russian language, feel free to ask me.

 

Your version

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Good morning/day/evening/year/life..)  (too wordy. A simple "Hello" or "Hi" is straight forward and informal.)

My name is Nina (too short for an introduction. combine with the next sentence). I'm a 22 years old student and I come from Tyumen, small city on (in) the south of Siberia.
Now I'm doing masters degree in International Business (see revised version above). So (a bit improper) I hope this site would be useful for improving my English (insert a comma) and learning all these languages I want to speak)(period/full stop)

And also I really enjoy teaching and helping people with languages, so (proper usage. good!) if you need help in learning Russian - feel free to ask me) 

 


"we weren't born for one corner; the whole world is our native land" Very true, is this original(yours)? don't try to tell that to the border patrols unless you'd confuse them :).

An astronaut once said "looking at the earth from space, there are no (border)lines". I think this is also profound. :)

 

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Good morning/day/evening/year/life..)

My name is Nina. I'm a 22 year old student from Tyumen, a small city in the south of Siberia.
I'm now doing a masters degree in International Business. So I hope this site will be useful for improving my English, and learning all the languages I want to speak)

And also I really enjoy teaching and helping people with languages, so if you need help with learning Russian - feel free to ask me)

...we weren't born for one corner; the whole world is our native land)

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Good morning/day/evening/year/life..)

My name is Nina. I'm a 22 years old student and I come from Tyumen, a small city on the south of Siberia.
Now I'm doing obtaining a masters degree in International Business. So I hope this site would be useful for in improving my English and learning all these languages I want to speak)

And also I really enjoy teaching and helping people with languages, so if you need help in learning Russian - feel free to ask me)

...we weren't born forom one corner; the whole world is our native land)

 

Comments: You 'obtain/get/working towards' a masters degree, not 'do' a masters degree.

 

You are already starting the sentence with 'And' therefore 'Also' is not necessary.

 

Hope this helps!

 

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Hi Nina, I'd like to be language partners on italki. I'm Ron in New York, USA. I'm happy to help you improve your spoken English. If you need help, please add me to your Skype: ron.jenkins86 And if you want a new friend, lets be friends! :) Thanks and see you soon!
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(we weren't born for one corner; the whole world is our native land),This sentence is very interesting, I love this sentence

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