rita's notebook entry: Apr 14, 2010

Today is Wednesday and I have to go to the Bank bank to make a withdrawal. Tomorrow is Thursday and I will take my mother to the doctor at 6pm._ The day after tomorrow is Friday and I have to go to the hairdresser's at 9,30 am 9.30am._ On Saturday I have reserved a seat at the movies cinema to see a very interesting film called "The Ghost Writer", which starts at 6,00 pm 6pm._ On Sunday my family and I are going to the fair and we will eat together there.

Notes:

Times in English must be given as follows, 3.25am, 11.30am, 6.47pm (full stops should be used, not commas). Also, the place at which you reserved a seat is called the cinema, not the movies.

rita's notebook entry: Apr 14, 2010

Today is Wednesday and I have to go to the Bank to make a withdrawal. Tomorrow is Thursday and I will take my mother to the doctor at 6 pm.. The day after tomorrow is Friday and I have to go to the hairdresser at 9,30 am.- On Saturday I have reserved a seat at the movies to see a very interesting film called " Ghost Writer", which starts at 6,00 pm.. On Sunday my family and I are going to fair and we will eat together there.

I think the corrections posted by James are both correct and reasonable.  In colloquial language however people DO say that they are going to the movies, but cinema is probably better in this context
Good work Rita.
Where have I seen this before?
Ciao Tony