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2010.7.24 Today I and my brother show my father's friends' daughter and son aroud in Zhuhai. Sometime I thought it is really no place to go and no thing to do in the Zhuhai.Sometime Zhuhai is boring without your best friends.But I still love Zhuhai, wherever I have gone. The daughter is Wanxi, a 22 girl.And the boy is ten,but I didn't know his name.He is really a erratic boy , I can't like him. I and my brother try our best to find the funny ativities to do with them,like shopping , play game machine,play bolwing,see a film...I didn't know how they feel, I thought this is a boring day. When I do those thing with my firends , it is really funny. Maybe because she is Hunan girl , I am a Cuangdong girl, I didn't interesting what she said . Maybe because our interests are very different.

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July. 24th.2010

        Today I and my old brother show my father's friends' daughter and son aroud in Zhuhai.

Sometime I thought it is really no place to go and no thing to do in the Zhuhai.Sometime Zhuh-

ai is boring without your best friends.But I still love Zhuhai, wherever I have gone.
        The daughter is Wanxi, a 22 girl.And the boy is ten,but I didn't know his name.He is really

a erratic boy , I can't like him at the all. 

        We  try our best to find the funny ativities to do with them,like shopping , play game mach-

ine,play bolwing,see a film...I didn't know how they feel, but I thought this is a boring day. Howev-

er when I do those thing with my firends , it is really funny.
        Maybe because she is Hunan girl , I am a Cuangdong girl, I didn't interesting what she talkin-

g about,we didn't in the same channel. maybe because our interests are very different.  Maybe s-

he didn't my friends.....

(ps:  It's time to improve my skill in writing English. Have someone like to help me ,like  to point out

my mistakes and correct my mistakes?)

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