My school trip to Berlin
I was in Berlin with my school one week ago. We saw so many interesting places. I knew that the capital of Germany is beautiful, but it is wonderful.
Germany borders Poland, so we hadn't a long distance. We went by bus only three hours.
I was taken aback when i saw city. Because of Christmas, everything is decorated by lights, Christmas trees, crèches, and so on. We saw museums, the Brandenburg Gate, which is a symbol of peace and liberty now.
We had free time at "Weihnachtsmarkt". It is a fair(?), when you can buy everything,especially, Christmas' decorates. When I was there I was also in Ferris Wheel. It was my first time. I saw Berlin bird's-eye view. It was fantastic:)
Certainly, I took a lot of pictures and bought a lot of souvenirs.
I recommend to visit in Berlin, because you won't bored there:)
(In the picture, you can see Weihnachtsmarkt and Ferris Wheel:))
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My school trip to Berlin
I was in Berlin with my classmates a week ago. We visited so many interesting places. I knew that the capital of Germany is beautiful, but I find it wonderful.
Poland is bordered to Germany so the trip wasn't long. It only took us three hours of bus ride to get there.
I was taken aback when I saw the city. Because of the Christmas season, everything is decorated with lights, Christmas trees, crèches, and so on. We visited museums and the Brandenburg Gate, a famous landmark in Germany which symbolizes peace and liberty.
We had a free time and went to a "Weihnachtsmarkt". It is an open market where you can buy everything especially Christmas decorations. I also rode the Ferris wheel for the first time and saw Berlin's view. It was fantastic.
I took a lot of pictures and bought a lot of souvenirs, of course.
I recommend you to visit Berlin. You will not get bored for sure.
(In the picture is the Weihnachtsmarkt and the Ferris wheel:))
Hi Sebastian! I hope it's okay that I corrected your entry.
I'd like to commend you for your composition. It has a good thought. But in your future essays, I hope you won't forget the use of articles (a,an,the). Keep writing and I'm sure you'll improve! Cheers!
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