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Wonderland in Edinburgh I felt so boring yesterday. It was about 5 pm, and my friend said why not went to the wonderland in Prince street, and have some fun. Yes! I almost forgot about it. A so called Edinburgh Eye was built for a long time, and I had wanted to go to there for quite a while. There were many tasty food and beverage sold in wonderland. I bought an apple that was wrapped with chocolate. It was a very interesting way to eat an apple. There were carrousel, skating rink as well. I guess there will be a lot of people around in wonderland in Xmas eve. :D

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Wonderland in Edinburgh

I  It felt so boring yesterday. It was about 5 pm, and my friend said "why not went go to the wonderland in Prince street and have some fun ?". Yes!  Of course I replied yes ! I almost forgot about it, a so called  what is called a Edinburgh Eye has been built for quite a while, and I had wanted to go to there for  quite a while  a long time. There were many tasty food and beverages sold in wonderland. I bought an apple that was wrapped with  in chocolate. It was a very interesting way to eat an apple. There were carrousels and a skating rink as well. I guess there will be a lot of people around in wonderland in during Xmas eve. :D

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Wonderland in Edinburgh

I felt so bored yesterday. It was about 5pm, and my friend said "Why not go to Wonderland in Prince street, and have some fun?" "Yes!"; I had almost forgot about it. A so called "Edinburgh Eye" was built a long time, and I had wanted to go there for quite a while. There were many tasty foods and beverages sold in wonderland. I bought an apple that was wrapped with chocolate. It was a very interesting way to eat an apple. There was a carrousel and a skating rink as well. I guess there will be a lot of people around in Wonderland on Xmas eve. :D

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