Some Shopping

I have met with a friend of mine this morning and we went to a shopping center to buy my wife's Christmas presents. I bought her a wristband and a dress. I think, I did it right with the size, but sometimes, it's a difficult issue. When we got back to our town, we went to have some beers at 13:00 and close to 14:00 o'clock enjoyed them for almost an hour. Then, I left my friend at home and I went to pick up my wife and my childen. We have eaten ate cheese "foundeu" today. I loved it!. It is molten melted cheese mixed with white wine and you use some bread to pick up the cheese from the pan.

This evening, we have to attend to a birthday. It's one of my wife's co-worker's son's birthday. We will have some cake there and we will be back home to till the dinner time.
Thanks in advance for your corrections.

Suggestion: While writing time, one can use either "00:00" format or "0 o'clock" format. But, there is no need to use them both together. "14:00 o'clock" should be either "14:00" or "14 o'clock."

Hi Javier (:

Some Shopping

I have met with a friend of mine this morning and we went to a shopping center to buy my wife's Christmas presents. I bought her a wristband and a dress. I think I did it right with the size but sometimes it's a difficult issue.When we got back our town, we had some beers at 13:00 and near to 14:00 o'clock I left my friend at home and I went to pick up my wife and my children, We have eaten cheese "foundue" today. I love it!. It's melted (or grilled) cheese mixed with white wine and you use some bread to pick up the cheese from the pan.
This evening we have to attend to a birthday. It's one of my wife co-worker son's birthday. We will have some cake there and we will back home to the dinner time.
Thanks in advance for your corrections!