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First notebook entry: Introducing myself my name is xxx i need same friends,so if you will my friend,please join me

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi there. My name is xxx. I need to make some friends. So if you will be my friend,please join me.

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hi solokid, um i changed the tense of your words so that the flow of the words run like the water in a river, i changed the punctuation as well i hope you dont mind. Your words were good before. I could definitely understand you and yes i would like to be your friend.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is xxx.I need some friends.If anyone likes to be my friend,please add me.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is xxx, i need some friends, so if you want to be my friend,  please,  join me.

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