First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a senior student majorING in Economics.

I am interested in English and also want to get a chance/HAVE A CHANCE of studying abroad.

I have a wide range of interests such as reading, travelling, music, and movies.

I hope I could make some new friends here improving my writting English ,and also I can give some help to somebody who wantS to learN Chinese.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a senior student majoring in Economics.

I am interested in English and also want to get a chance of to studying abroad.

I have a wide range of interests such as reading, travelling, music, and movies.

I hope I could to make some new friends here improving to improve my writting written English ,.  and also I can also give some help to somebody anybody who wants to learm Chinese.

Here is how I would write it in everyday English.  This is only one way, of course.

I'm a senior majoring in Economics.

I'm interested in English and would like to study abroad.

I have many interests including reading, travelling, music, and movies. 

 I hope to make new friends here so that I can improve my written English

I can also help anyone who wants to learn Chinese.

You don't have to say "'senior student" because, when you say senior, it's obvious to the reader that you're a student.

We can also  say, ''...have the opportunity of studying abroad."

This may be merely a personal preference, but I have found that Chinese use ''such as" much more often than I'm accustomed to.  Sometimes the use seems to be dictated by Chinese grammar, rather than English and so it sounds a little artificial to me. Again, it may be only my own manner of speaking. 

All in all, you write well.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a senior student major in Economics.

I am interested in English and also want to get a chance of studying abroad.

I have a wide range of interests such as reading, travelling, music, and movies.

I hope I could make some new friends here improving my writting English ,and also give some help to somebody who want to learn Chinese.