First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm Amy, a girl, who is from the north of China. I have leant English for many years, but it is still in at the lowest level. Of course, yesterday, my attitud desided  I decided that i can not learn it well. But now i realize that i have to learn it and i am not hating do  not hate it as i thought. So I come here and join this big family to improve myself.

You  seem to have a good knowledge of grammar rules, but your writing is somewhat  "correct but not common.''  That is, you use correct grammar, more or less,  but your syntax  is not exactly like that of a native speaker.  I'll give you an example of how I would write it.

I'm Amy from  north China.  I've studied English for many years, but I'm still at the beginner's level.  Yesterday I thought that I just cannot learn it well.  But now I realize that I have to learn it abnd I don;t really hate it as much as I thought.  So I'm here to join this big family to improve myself.

" a girl who is from north China" is ''correct but not common."  "A girl from north China" is much simpler.

一般而言，

在英文学习是study(活动),学会是learn(结果)。

最好说：although yesterday I thought I couldn't master it, nevertheless now I realize that...

不要失望！

只要有时间和耐心， 桑树叶子会变成绸大褂。