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Money and Dream If you have one million Yuan now, what will you do and what your life will change? Will you still get up early and study hard? Will you keep friendship with your poor but good friends? Will you throw out your interest of reading books? Will you give up your dream which is about the revolution of education? Will you......? Sometimes I think I am a humble boy who learn and work hard because of the lacking of money. I know that it is very important to improve the living conditions of me and my parents. Looking at myself, my major is history, but I cannot even tell a story completely and vividly. Though I have learnt English for 8 years, but cannot speak it fluently. I need plenty of money to have a good condition. I used to think I cannot do nothing great, and thought there were so many difficulties, so upset feelings are filling my mind. But after I having thought about the question of having one million Yuan, I find my mind broaden. There are many things that I can do and many progress that I can gain without that a mount of money. Whatever poor or rich, I will keep my dream, and struggle to achieve it. Whatever, I will enjoy reading studying and writing; Whatever, I will keep the warmest friendship of those boys and girls. And if I keep on exercises, the body will become strong, I will be more enthusiastic. Now, I am a young man who is willing to do better and working hard but happily. Whatever poor or rich, I am what I am! Now, I believe I can live a happy life at present and in the future. What I need is studying hard to make myself intelligent, capable and strong. My dream will become true!

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Money and Dream

If you have had one million Yuan right now, what will would you do and what your life will change? how would your life change?

Will you still get up early and study hard? Will you keep friendships with your poor, but good friends? Will you throw out your interest of reading books? Will you give up your dream, which is about the revolution of education? Will you......? Sometimes I think I am a humble boy who learns and works hard because of the lack of money. I know that it is very important to improve the living conditions of me and my parents. Looking at myself, my major is history, but I cannot even tell a story completely and vividly. Although I have learned English for 8 years, I cannot speak it fluently. I need plenty of money to have a good condition. I used to think I cannot couldn’t do nothing anything great, and thought there were so many difficulties.  So many upset feelings are were filling my mind.

But after having thoughts about the question of having one million Yuan, I find found my mind had broadened. There are many things that I can do, and many so much progress that I can gain without that amount of money. Whatever it be,poor or rich, I will keep my dream. I will struggle to achieve it. Whatever the situation, I will enjoy reading, studying and writing. Whatever the situation, I will keep the warmest friendship of those boys and girls. And if I keep on with the exercises, the body will become strong, and I will be more enthusiastic. Right now, I am a young man who is willing to do better and working hard, but happily. Whatever it be,poor or rich, I am what I am! Now, I I now believe I can live a happy life at present and in the future. What I need is studying to study hard to make myself intelligent, capable and strong. My dream will become true!

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“The most terrible poverty is loneliness, and the feeling of being unloved.” I am sure you will live your dreams if you focus on what you want.Good luck
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Trust yourself and pay attention to your aims.
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You seem very clever boy and you will get your aims.Just try in your life please:)
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You have to communicate with others,oil,i'm believe your dream will come ture.

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