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Bday party Hi,everyone. Winter has come! It is very cold here. But I like this season,because Christmas and my birthday are in winter. Last night, I had a birthday party with my friends. We were born on October,November,and December. We made Takoyaki and Nabe. And We made cheesecake by rice cooker. It was so good and easy! We had a great time! We were laughing all the time. Next,I will have a Christmas party. So excited! How will you spend Christmas? Could you please correct my English?

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Hi, everyone.
Winter has arrived! It is very cold here.
But I like this season, because both Christmas and my birthday are in winter.

Last night, I had a birthday party with my friends.
We were all born in either October, November or December.
We made Takoyaki and Nabe. And we also made cheesecake in/using the rice cooker.
It was so tasty and easy to make!
We had a great time!
We were laughing so much.

Next, I will have a Christmas party. So excited!
How will you spend Christmas? 

Could you please correct my English?

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