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Waiting Bus Waiting bus is always made me mad. Every 10 minutes should the bus have come, sometimes I had to wait unless half an hour. I want to shout to the drive, but I know it's not his fault. I just watched the ground, there are glass bottles, even some little ants. I am kidding, even I am listening my Mp3, I sill got to mad. Buses not only come late, but also very dirty. There are a lot of newspapers and trash everywhere. I prefer to walk rather than taking a bus.

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Forgot - "Waiting for the bus" Sorry...
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Waiting Bus

Waiting for a bus is has always made me mad. Every 10 minutes, should the bus should have come, - sometimes I had to wait unless half an hour.
I want to shout to the driver, but I know it's not his fault.
I just watched the ground - there are glass bottles, even some little ants. I am kidding, even I am listening my Mp3, I am still got to mad.
Buses not only come late, but also very dirty.
There are a lot of newspapers and trash everywhere.
I prefer to walk rather than takeing a bus.

[Not a bad effort - your tense should remain the same throughout the article, though.]

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