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Whether or not we should believe the news presented by journalists or news organisations It is universally acknowledged that communications include various manners,such as newspapers,TV programs and the Internet.But the information people receiving from those approaches has been edited by journalists or news providers.Thereby,the masses cannot believe these news.Speaking for myself,the certain condition of our media leaves much to be desired. First of all,no on account can we ignore the significance of the media,but there is no denying that some of the news presented by journalists has lost their realism.Certain news organisations enjoy their reputation for presenting the news reasonably objectively,whereas others are obviously biased or under the control of governments or groups which seek to manipulate the media.If a news organisation almost supposes of opposes a government of group,its objectivity should be called into question.Secondly,thinks to the rapid accelerating of digital technology,people can easily to take quality photos ,it has become hard to deny an accident that has happened or other facts.Rather than to deny clear facts,which would only reduce the credibility of journalists and news providers,those same journalists and news organisations seek to influence us with the opinions. These opinions are often not clearly separated from the facts,which can lead to the spread of misinformation. Therefore,as journalists,they should have an objective and balanced perspective and have the ability to make out the truth among our life.Also,in order to be qualified news providers,they should have the self-determination and the sense of responsibility.It is the journalists' duty and obligation to bring home to the masses the realism of our society. However, our news orginasations and news providers should spare no efforts to create a benign relation with the city dwellers,relaying on presenting credible news.Also,our government should supervise the media but not seek to manipulate therm.Only by doing those can our citizens have faith to media.

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Whether or not we should believe the news presented by journalists or news organisations

It is universally acknowledged that communications include various media, such as newspapers,TV programs and the Internet. However, the information people are receiving from those approaches has been edited by journalists or news providers.In consequence, the masses cannot believe these news. Speaking for myself, the uncertain condition of our media leaves much to be desired.
First of all, no on no account can we ignore the significance of the media, but there is no denying that some of the news presented by journalists has lost its realism. Certain news organisations enjoy their reputation for presenting the news reasonably objectively, whereas others are obviously biased or under the control of governments or groups which seek to manipulate the media. If a news organisation appears to support or oppose a government or group, its objectivity should be called into question. Secondly, thanks to the rapid progress of digital technology, people can easily to take quality photos; this has made it hard to deny an accident that has happened or other facts for which there is photographic evidence. Rather than to deny clear facts, which would only reduce the credibility of journalists and news providers, those same journalists and news organisations seek to influence us with the opinions. These opinions are often not clearly separated from the facts, which can lead to the spread of misinformation.
Therefore, as journalists, they should have an objective and balanced perspective and have the ability to clearly identify the truth in our lives. Also, in order to be qualified news providers, they should have the self-determination and a sense of responsibility. It is the journalists' duty and obligation to bring home to the masses the realism of our society.
However, our news organisations and news providers should spare no efforts to create a benign relationship with the city dwellers, relaying on and presenting credible news. Also, our government should supervise the media but not seek to manipulate therm. Only by doing those things can our citizens have faith in the media.

 

Nice essay.  Look out for careless spelling errors. Don't forget that it's essential to leave a space after commas and fullstops. In my opinion, objectivity in news media is anaspiration which is rarely achieved. Be sceptical and question their motives. Look for what they're NOT saying, too!

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