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life is like what Life is like a circle.We started from a meaningless dot.Than we followed others' steps to lrearn chatting ,pretending and many other skills…Later we realized that if we want to get something we need to be powerful enough.So we began to seek weath and fame.Many and many years later,when we review the past,we found that we are wrong.We have changed our youth into money and power. Why? What's for? We thougt it is right when we areignorant.As the time rolling around ,we changed our mind.We started to think about the true meaning of life and live.Findly,we realized that what we have done is only following generational rule.We are not living for ourselves.We walked forward one by one on the big circle without brain.We need to change! (PS:I am in blue now and alomst crazy for the job hunting.God bless me !!)

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life is like what What is life like?

Life is like a circle.We started from a meaningless dot. We then Than we followed in other people's footsteps others' steps learning to speak to lrearn chatting, pretending and many other skills…Later we realized that if we want to get something we need to be powerful enough. So we begin began to seek wealth and fame.Many and many years later, when we look at review the past,we find found that we are wrong. We have changed our youth into money and power. Why? What's it for? We think that this is thougt it is right when we are in fact ignorant. As the time goes on rolling around, we beging to changed our minds. We started to think about the true meaning of life and how to live. Finally Findly, we realized that our actions have what we have done is only been following previous generations generational rule. We are not living for ourselves. We have walked an entire forward one by one on the big circle without even thinking brain. We need to change!
(PS:I am in blue now and have almost gone alomst crazy from for the job hunting.God bless me !!)

不错我同意!祝你好运 :)

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And I have been learning that some times I must be silent.To know a little better and think a little wiser maybe this is the only way for me. Good luck Edith

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