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my new day Today is a double-good day. I have to say some good things happened in this day.First , today is my mother's birthday! My brother and i just phoned my mom to show ours love and wishes to her. Second, one of my middle school classmate will get her marriage certificate . I really hope she will have a happy family~~~ Although the weather in my city is very chilly, my heart is filled with happiness and warmness.I call this day is my new day. Of course, as for others, it means nothing, but it for me means something. New day, new start, i hope i can be good with my new life~~~come on///

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My New Day

Today is a "double-good" day. I have to say some good things happened are happening in on this day. First, today is my mother's birthday! My brother and I just phoned my mom her to show ours our love and express best wishes to her. Second, one of my middle-school classmates will get her marriage certificate. I really hope she will have a happy family.~~~
Although the weather in my city is very chilly, my heart is filled with happiness and warmness warmth. I call this day is my new day. Of course, as for others, it means nothing, but it for me it means something a great deal.
New day, new start, I hope I can be good with my new life~~~come on 加油.///

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Thank you so much~~~
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Happy birthday to your Mom and congratulations on your friend.

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