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My text about Zoo Zoo Not surprisingly that the Zoo is the most interesting place. If in a city there is a Zoo, it is the most favourite vacation spot for adults and children(for all people). Here prevails fun, surprise,pleasure,affection with a meeting with animals. In my Sibirian city ,where the summer lasts within a year only 3-4 months , and the snow and frosty winter lasts about 6 months, a Zoo long cold not to create.The Zoo has appeared 3 years ago at the initiative of city administration. To contain animals in such hard climatic conditions is difficult.Not all animals can sustain a frost,cold wind,absence of fruit in a considerable quantity. But nevertheless the new Zoo became a place of an attraction of children of all age.

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My Text about the Zoo

The Zoo
Not surprisingly, that the zoo is the a most interesting place. If in a city there is a zoo, it is the most favourite vacation spot for adults and children (for all people). Here prevails fun, surprise, pleasure, and affection with a meeting with animals. In my Sibirian Siberian city, where the summer lasts within a year only 3-4 three to four months a year, and the snow and frosty winter lasts last about 6 six months, a zoo long cold not to create was not created for a long time due to the cold. The zoo has appeared 3 three years ago at the initiative of the city administration. To contain Keeping animals in such hard harsh climatic conditions is difficult. Not all animals can sustain a withstand frost, cold wind, and absence of fruit in any considerable quantity quantities. But nevertheless, the new zoo became a place of an attraction of for children of all ages.

 

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I hope the animals are provided with warm coats, hats, gloves and scarves during your cold Siberian winter so that they can come out to play again in the summer. :)))
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I hope the animals are provided with warm coats, hats, gloves and scarves during your cold Siberian winter so that they can come out to play again in the summer. :)))

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