Hello,everyone.My name is Stephanie.I'm come form Shanghai,a beautiful and fashion city in China.I'm a sopomore student in college.My specialty is interior design.It's a very interesting specialty and i love it.I hope so many person can live the house by my design.I'm going to Canada for my study next year,and the other very important side,i will attend the IELTS next month,but i'm very nervous now! I haven't any confidence to pass it.so i want to improve my English.I will study hard and try my best.

1. Choose from these two: "I come from" or "I'm coming from". Are you going to use the first or the second phrase? It's up to you. But remember, never mix up the to-be (is, am, are) with Verb 1, like I'm come. Big no no.

2. Choose from these two: "A beautiful fashion city" or "a beautiful and fashionable city." The rule is, if you want to give "and" to your sentence, make sure you're comparing the same things, like adjective with adjective, noun with noun, etc.

3. "Sophomore".

4. "I". Never use "i" for your writing. Except when you're chatting or twittering or FB-ing.

5. "So many person(s) can live (in) the house(s) by my that I design(ed)"

Hope this helps! Keep on studying!