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Funny or Touching ? When I was alone, my mind kept refreshing this old memory. It was when I was 10 years old. I came back from school and on the way back, I entered a small convenient store. I can’t remember what did I buy but surely after I bought something, my eyes caught many toys at the back of the store. I decided to have one so I bought a black-spider toy and it looked like a Black Widow Spider, looked like a real one. I was happy as I could have the world’s most dangerous spider in the world although it was fake. At home, I kept teasing my sisters as they were very afraid of spiders. I was very happy back then. And when I slept on that night, I just left the spider on the floor of my room. Surprisingly, in the next morning, when I woke up, I saw my father was trying to kill the spider by using a long stick. I tried not to laugh but I cannot resist it and ended up burst into laugh. Then I said, “father, that is just a toy.” He looked confusing for a moment before he joined me laughing. I kept remembering that sweet memory whenever I miss him. That was so sweet of him. Although it was a bit funny but at least I know that he loves me. Thanks father. (:

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Funny or Touching ?

When I was alone, my mind kept refreshing this old memory. It was when I was 10 years old. I came back from school and on the way back, I entered a small convenient store. I can’t remember what I bought did I buy but surely after I bought something, my eyes was caught by many toys at the back of the store. I decided to have one so I bought a black-spider toy and it looked like a Black Widow Spider, looked like a real one. I was happy as I could have the world’s most dangerous spider in the world although it was fake.

At home, I kept teasing my sisters as they were very afraid of spiders. I was very happy back then. And when I was sleeping slept on that night, I just left the spider on the floor of my room. Surprisingly, in the next morning, when I woke up, I saw my father was trying to kill the spider by using a long stick. I tried not to laugh but could not I cannot resist it and ended up with burst into laugh. Then I said, “father, that is just a toy.” He looked confusedconfusing for a moment before he joined me laughing.

I keepkept remembering that sweet memory whenever I miss him. That was so sweet of him. Although it was a bit funny but at least I know that he loves me. Thanks, father. (:

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A both interesting and touching story. I enjoyed reading it. :)
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tounching ,a nice father,
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Very nice and touching
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I love your story <3

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