Very quietly I take my leave as quietly as I came I take my leave as quietly as I came.

I'm accustomed to log into my QQ(a software like MSN) everyday, and the moment when I was to log on it again tonight, my heart sinked. sank.
There is someone I miss very deeply, somehow I can't connect with him, for we can never be together—a thousand time no  a thousand times over.So last night, I decided not to log on to QQ any longer until I removed my deep thoughts for him. Just now, when I wanted to log on to it again, it seemed that there was a string in my heart that pulled me back. A a voice from my heart told me that "you can't". Now I realized that once we try to escape something, and when it reappears in our mind, we will be are afraid to face it, no matter how brave we were. are.
The only thing I can do is to treasure the memory,happy or blue.Dear friend, I know how busy you are, you seldom have time to see me. Very quietly I take my leave,as quietly as I came; yet I won't I wave good-bye before you, so I can console myself that we are never apart,you are eternal in my heart.

You have done an excellent job with your english. Very few corrections needed. A very beautiful way of writing some very intense emotions. It was easy to understand what you were saying - even if there was some incorrect grammer. If you can be understood by others - then you have reached a very high point in your language learning indeed!

Very quietly I take my leave, as quietly as I came

I'm accustomed to log onto my QQ(a software like MSN) everyday, and the moment when I was to log on it again tonight, my heart sunk (or sank).
There is someone I miss very deeply, somehow I can't connect with him, for we can never be together—a thousand times no.So last night, I decided not to log on QQ any longer until I have removed my deep thoughts for him. Just now, when I wanted to log in again, it seemed that there was a string in my heart that pulled me back, a voice from my heart told me that "you can't". Now I realized, once we try to escape something, and when it reappears in our mind, we will be afraid to face it, no matter how brave we are.
The only thing I can do is to treasure the memory,happy or blue.Dear friend, I know how busy you are, you seldom have time to see me. Very quietly I take my leave,as quietly as I came; yet I won't I wave good-bye to you, so I can console myself that we are never apart,you are eternally in my heart.