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Hard earned Seats Last Saturday our team had a dinner party in a resturant named "Green Tea". I had never been there but I'd heard of the resturant several times for it's good reputation of popularity and delicious dishes. As a result when our manager mentioned this resturant, I was happy to say yes immediately and volunteered that I could get there earlier and occupy a table for us. Saturday morning, as I on the computer searched for where the resturant is located and how to get there, I regreted what I had promised. It was a long distance from my home to there and there was no direct bus, in fact, I had to transfer two times and then walk 15 mins at least. I phoned to the manager to make sure if the dinner would be going on schedule and hoped she would say it had been canceled for any reason. Unfortuately she just told me I must get there before 4pm otherwise it would be hard to have a table at 5:30pm which was the appointed dinner time . I set out at 2pm for the mission. After two hours bus and walking time, I arrived at the famous resturant. I felt a little tired but still curious how a place it was. There had been many people waiting there except those had been around tables. I took a number paper (B3) and was arranged to sit on the sofa served with a book and some bread (the resturant prepared much for the waiting people). "There are only 2 tables before me. It will be quick to my turn". I thought. However I didn't hear any number was called during the next one hour. I realized that the people were sitting around the tables were still waiting for their parteners. I felt hopeless. As I was losing patient, B1 was called and there was none responsed. My hope was arising and prayered that B2 would not be answered. My prayer succeeded and I got the table for six on time. The colleagues came one after one and they were all surprised we had been had a table already. That comforted me somehow. I had prepared and waited for the dinner over three and a half hours that what I wanted was only finishing the meal quickly and getting home. How about the dishes? I don't know. What made me impression was the long way and crowded sofa.

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Hard earned Seats

Last Saturday our team had a dinner party at a resturant named "Green Tea".

I had never been there but I've heard of the resturant several on more than one occasion (there is nothing wrong, this is a colloquism) times for it's good on account of its reputation of popularity and delicious dishes. As a result when our manager mentioned this resturant, I was happy to say yes immediately and volunteered that I could (use present tense and keep consistent verb tense) to get there early and occupy a table for us. (superfluous)

Saturday morning, as I searched on the computer for where the resturant's location and directions how to get there, I regreted what I had my promise. It was a long distance from my home to there and there was no direct bus. (run on sentence)  In fact, I had to transfer two times twice and then walk at least 15 minutes (spell out). I phoned to Phoning (this is a type of construction using an infinitive) the manager to make sure if the dinner would be going on schedule and I hoped she would say it had been canceled for just about any reason. Unfortuately she just told me I must get there before 4pm, otherwise it would be hard to have a table at 5:30pm which was the appointed dinner time.

I set out at 2pm for the mission. After two hours on the bus and walking time, I arrived at the famous resturant. I felt a little tired but still curious how what kind of a place it was. There had been were many people waiting there except aside from those who had already seated at the been around tables. I took a number paper (B3) and was arranged to sit on the sofa served with a book and some bread (the resturant prepared much for the waiting people). "There are only 2 tables before me. It will be quick to my turn". I thought. However I didn't hear any number was called during the next one hour. I realized that the people were sitting around the tables were still waiting for their parteners. I felt hopeless.

As I was losing patient, B1 was called and there was none responsed. My hope was arising and prayered that B2 would not be answered. My prayer succeeded and I got the table for six on time. The colleagues came one after one and they were all surprised we had been had a table already. That comforted me somehow.

I had prepared and waited for the dinner over three and a half hours that what I wanted was only finishing the meal quickly and getting home. How about the dishes? I don't know. What made me impression was the long way and crowded sofa.

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can you also help with my passage?...i'm preparing for my ielts exam
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a lot of typing there.
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Yes I am in Hangzhou where there are many crowded restaurants. It's even becoming a culture in the city. Don't you think so?
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Oh, I accidentally clicked finished too early. Anyway, this reminds me of a famous episode of Seinfeld, (a very popular comedy which is not easily viewable in China) where Jerry and his friends wait and wait for a table at a famous Chinese restaurant.

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