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If the government should fund much on art projects(You are welcom to correct my essay) Whether our government should finance on artistic projects is always regarded as a controversial issue.Some people support to spend much money on it,whilst others believe the reverse is true.Personally,I do agree with the perspective that the government should fund available money on art. On no account can we ignore the significance of the art.First of all,lack of arts is one of the most serious defects that we have ever known about today's culture.Spending more funds on it can not only make our country more beautiful and interesting, but also have a cultural diversity.Also,another advantage of funds on arts is that people can acknowledge nation's history and culture through it. We are all know that the spiritual force is contained by arts.For individuals,they can cultivate our artistic inspiration.It pays to fund much on artistic projects The reason is that with the communication of arts,our mind can be purified.Last but not least,the government appropriate funds on construction of Art Gallery will attract many tourists from around the world,which can stimulate the local tourism industry and the name of economic development. To conclusion,our country needs artistic embelishment and we need it to spread the culture.Anyway,we need art to nurture.We have no reasons to give much financing on it,we also have no rights to ignore its construction.Art is the human wisdom another symbol.

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Should the government properly fund art projects (You are welcome to correct my essay)

Whether or not our government should finance on artistic projects is always regarded as a controversial issue. Some people support to spending a significant amount of money on it, whilst others believe the reverse is true. Personally, I do agree with the perspective that the government should provide funds to support art.
On no account can we ignore the significance of the Arts. First of all, lack of the Arts is one of the most serious defects that we have ever known in today's culture. Spending more funds on it can not only make our country more beautiful and interesting, but also have a cultural diversity. Also, another advantage of funding the Arts is that people can acknowledge the nation's history and culture through it. We are all know that the spiritual force is contained by arts.For individuals, they can cultivate our artistic inspiration .It pays to spend as much as possible on artistic projects. The reason is that through the communication of arts, our minds can be purified. Last but not least, if the government spends appropriate funds on construction of art galleries, it will attract many tourists from around the world, which can stimulate the local tourism industries and promote economic development.
In conclusion, our country needs artistic embelishment and we need it to spread the culture. Anyway,we need art to be nurtured. We have no reasons to allocate much finance to it; we also have no rights to ignore its construction. Art is a symbol of the human wisdom another symbol.

I agree :)

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