First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello,everyone.My name is Queena,i am from XiangYang ,China.It is the first time i have been here.Nice to meet you.I want to make friends with you,and improve my english too.
I like english,i think it is a cool language.I like watching the America TV show,such as Desperate housewives、Prison Break、Friends and so on.I wander oneday if i could speak english very fluent.That will be so cool~haha.
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Hi, Queena. Cool name! My name is Yulia and I lern English too. I hope we`ll be friends. Chat on English help to improve English and make new friends)
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Hi , Queena , I am from Russia . I like watch Prison Break but aspecially Friends . I want improve my english through chatting
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The big correction is the formatting. A space after a comma, two spaces after a period, a line between paragraphs, the pronoun for self is always capitolized. The grammar is great but for the last sentence which should be conditional to match the sentence before it; conditionals are advanced grammar. You learned a lot of English! Continue! My Skype: brian.madden4
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