It's Not Worth Fighting

"Don't..." indicates a command.

Why fight?

This weekend following a week of tests, my friends and I (I learned this from my last note.. haha) had a barbecue at a house of a galley friend colleague (galley friend is very rare, and means you are all sailors) to celebrate the end of the classes! There were drinks - beers and vodka - and only had friends... until one guy arrived with his own friends whom anybody knew, and he brought his own drink: the ABSOLUT Vodka (asshole... haha)... so we all got together and enjoyed the barbecue, drinking too much. But When one of my friends began drinking the ABSOLUT vodka, the guy punched my friend and started the fight... in short, the barbecue was over, and the cops arrived and we were expelled from the house. Nobody was arrested and we went to the beach to relax and laught at what happened... all the girls were crying but I WAS THERE (to comfort them?)... LOL!

I really enjoyed reading this story! Still, please pay attention to basic grammar such as singular/plural (was/were) and past tense.

You'll notice I changed some actions to past continuous... this is used to create a 'background' and set up the next action: began drinking... punched!; were crying... was there!. :)

Don't Not Worth Fighting

Why fight? This weekend after a week of tests, my friends and I ( I learned this in my last Note.. haha ) had a barbecue at a house of a galley friend to celebrate the end of the class! There were drinks: beers and vodka, only had just friends... until a guy arrived with his friends that nobody knew and he brought his own drink the 'ABSOLUT Vodka' (asshole... haha) so we got togueter together and enjoyed the barbecue; drinking too much. But when one of my friends drank some of the ABSOLUT, the guy hit my friend and started the a fight... In short, the barbecue was over and the cops arrived. We were expelled from the house, nobody was arrested and we went to the beach, beatch relaxed and laughed at what happened... All the girls cried but I WAS THERE... LOL!

I, he, she was                      (singular)

We, they, you were             (plural)  Note: 'you' is always plural in English