My Crazy girlfriend！
I feel very sad this moment！
Maybe you can't belive that my girl friend fight with me at the time of dinner！
I hate someone who Throw anything with force when he/she is angry.We are Over the troop just because this .Tonight I want to chat with my friends,but i'm afraid that'll influent my friends‘mood.I just write it down to slow down a surge of great fury . I always bless someday my girlfriend can know Mature and then we can just live with eachother peaceful!!!
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My Crazy girlfriend！
I'm feeling very sad.
You wouldn't believe it, but my girlfriend was fighting with me during dinner.
I hate people who throw things when they are angry. We are Over the troop just because this (I'm sorry, but I'm not sure what you mean by this.) Tonight, I want to chat with my friends, but I'm afraid that I'll influence their mood. So, I'm just writing this down to slow down a surge of great fury. I hope someday my girlfriend will become more mature and then we can just live together peacefully!!!
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I changed some sentences a lot to sound more natural. I hope it isn't too confusing.
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I wish I had the energy right now to help you and correct this English here. But, I will say, I also hope your girlfriend can settle down. She needs to learn how to control her temper.
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