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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello,everyone! I' m a 25-year-old girl from china.My English name is Vera. I am a English major,and I love English.I hope I can get some achivements in the field of English.It is my aspiration to speak fluent English and I want to be an excellent interpreter,but there is much room for me to improve my English and it needs my hard work I like reading,and I think books can provide me with confidence and strength when I feel desperate. I'm a girl who has a tender heart. When my friends are upset by some troubles,I would like to be an honest listener with the aim that they can be relieved through talking to me. I'm sensitive to others' feeling and emotion, at the same time,i can understand well what they take to me,so i hope i can try my best to console them. I need your help in my major,but also i'm willing to be helpful to you. With mutual help,i hope we can become best friends,and work together to pursue our dreams.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello_everyone! I' m a 25-year-old girl from China._My English name is Vera.
I am an English major,_and I love English._I hope I can get some achievements many things in the field of English._It is my aspiration to speak fluent English and I want to be an excellent interpreter,_but there is much room for me to improve my English and it needs my hard work
I like reading,_and I think books can provide me with confidence and strength when I feel desperate.
I'm a girl who has a tender heart. When my friends are upset by some troubles,_I would like to be an honest listener with the aim that they can be relieved through talking to me. I'm sensitive to others' feelings and emotions, and at the same time,_I can understand well what they take say to me,_so I hope I can try my best to console them.
I need your help in with my major,_but also I'm willing to be helpful to you.
With mutual help,_I hope we can become best friends_and work together to pursue our dreams.

Hi Vera, your English level is excellent but you make some very basic mistakes which at your level you should not be making. For example, your puncutation is all wrong! You should make sure you insert a space after every comma and full stops (you made this mistake 12 times in this short text). Furthermore, you should be careful with capital letters. The word "China" must always start with a capital "C", and the word "I" (first person pronoun) should always be with a capital letter (you made this basic mistake 5 times above!). Apart from these basic mistakes, your English reads very well and I'm sure you will develop into a very good English speaker.

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