Off Work - Finally!

Off work, finally! and I have two days off because I worked the late night shift last night. I'm going to go downtown and maybe have an eye-gazing look-see tonight.

Be careful of using shorhand when it's not appropriate.  Forms like bcz and i are fine when you have limitations of time and space (ie. online chat and sms), but if you use them instead of proper forms in emails and general writing, you look a little illiterate.

"Eye-gazing" sounds a little weird. :) I suggested a very casual expression to have a look-see. In general, it's best to write have a browse around or something like that. 

off work finally

off work finally! and i have two days off bcz i worked in late night shift last night.I'm going to downtown and maybe have an eye-gazing tonight.

Off work finally! and I have two days off bcz I worked late last night on night shift. I'm going downtown and maybe have an eye-gazing tonight.